I did enjoy your movie trailer but you have some graphics that were too fast, some errors such as when you said "been a god", it should have been "being a god". You should have put the sources in your movie trailer... Other than this, you have done a great job.
I enjoyed your movie trailer though I thought you needed to get to the point as it went on a bit to long. Try not to explain the whole story and leave the end a mystery to make it seem more like a movie trailer. But overall it was a good trailer. Good Job! It seems as if you put a lot of effort into it.
This was really good Zifan, but you did not give it a title. Like if this would be a real movie you would have to name it something like "Zeus, the god of gods" for example. Otherwise, great job!
I did enjoy your movie trailer but you have some graphics that were too fast, some errors such as when you said "been a god", it should have been "being a god". You should have put the sources in your movie trailer... Other than this, you have done a great job.
ReplyDeleteYou also have to put at least 15 pictures but you put 13...
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed your movie trailer though I thought you needed to get to the point as it went on a bit to long. Try not to explain the whole story and leave the end a mystery to make it seem more like a movie trailer. But overall it was a good trailer. Good Job! It seems as if you put a lot of effort into it.
ReplyDeleteI liked it. At the beginning it was to fast. I could not read the text but then it was fine
ReplyDeleteThis was really good Zifan, but you did not give it a title. Like if this would be a real movie you would have to name it something like "Zeus, the god of gods" for example. Otherwise, great job!
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